The winning paragraph
Altogether 11 took part in the recent Father's Day Contest. Two of the participants were my staff. I only wanted to choose the winner from the other nine.
First, we had a look at the length of the submitted paragraphs. Lengthy ones were omitted. Then we look at those posted pictures. Participants were supposed to send in their photos with their fathers. Some sent in their family photos which we thought that it's not so relevant.
Then left only 4 participants. Among the four, only two really answered the question: "What makes your dad happy?"
"My superhero dad is loving, humble and kind and it makes him happy to
see that his children have absorbed the teachings instilled in them. It
delights him when he can make me smile even on my bad days. He is
happiest during school holidays when his grandchildren visit."
"Dad always put us, his children first before everything else; we as his children, putting in an effort in every aspects to show our love and concern towards him will certainly makes him Happy!"
"Dad always put us, his children first before everything else; we as his children, putting in an effort in every aspects to show our love and concern towards him will certainly makes him Happy!"
After some discussion, we came to a conclusion.. We chose the winner.
Congrats to the winner!
ReplyDeletecongrats to them..
Deletewow, the judges are very strict with the rules, haha~~
ReplyDeleteof course..
Deletebut very true that the contestants must first answer the questions correctly.. :)
ReplyDeletedefinitely..
Deletecongratulations to Shane!! she looks very familiar, she won the Mother's Day contest also??
ReplyDeleteshe won the mother's day consolation prize.
Deleteno matter what, i think all who participated should be given a pat on their shoulders..
ReplyDeleteall deserve a prize
Deleteby participating, they are showing how proud they are of their daddies.. :)
ReplyDeletetrue..
Deletei can see a lot of Brand's chicken essence for the winner (and her dad)..
ReplyDeletejust a box actually
Deletesure that will make them more healthy!! haha~~ :)
ReplyDeletehealthy drink indeed
DeleteCongrats to the winner..
ReplyDeleteBtw ur contest is only on fb?
Why don't like u print some contest form and if customer spend more than rm50 then they could give a contest form..
So that more ppl will take part..
Slogan why I like to buy in your shop.. Something like that Le..
my objective is to get more people to like my page..
Deleteanyway, thanks for your suggestion..
Congratulations to the winner!
ReplyDeletecongrats to them..
DeleteThere are winners and there are losers.
ReplyDeleteall participants are winners..no losers..
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